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©2009-2010 *Dekkard2
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oh sh*t son! =O

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:iconespnb:
What's good with this drawing is that you've got that difficult perspective right. I would certainly have huge problems getting that right.
But there is some small mistakes. The proportions of the man holding his hands behind his head is incorrect. I'm then talking about his left arm being way too long compared to his other arm, not to mention the rest of his body. The basic rule is that the bigger the object, the nearer is it to the spectator. (But I'm not gonna give you a lecture about that, you probably know that :P)
Which also brings us to the woman's breasts, the furthest one being the bigger one.
I have no experience when it comes to the style of manga (which I assume this is?), so I can't really tell so much about that, but you've got the perspective spot on and the shading is great as well :)
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:iconjerkdouglas:
VERY nice perspective on this. Also looks a lot cleaner and nicer in general. But you're signing your picture too many times. XD

Great job, man.

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:icondekkard2:
lol, thanks
there's two signatures because it's two drawings put together (I forgot to delete the 2nd signature)
:iconjerkdouglas:
Oh, hahaha. Well that makes sense XD

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